понедельник, 1 апреля 2013 г.

Writing a story

Describe a present you would give to a jumping chicken who wears a blue space suit.

In the last century I visited my aunt Brendy on the star Nihail,in the 624 th Nebula. And now Iˇm planning to visit her again because her favourite pet will be 161 years old. This petˇs name is Monica and itˇs a space chicken. But it is unusual space chicken,it always wears a blue space suit and itˇs about 4 meters in height and about 3 meters in widht and it has a very unusual habit-it always jumps,all the time! Itˇs the oldest chicken in the galaxy. So itˇs a very famous pet, which has taken part in many exhibitions. My aunt is very proud of it.
I think that itˇs birthday party will be on Earth, despite itˇs a very expensive pleasure.Also there will be the most famous people in the galaxy with diffirent exotic presents.I havenˇt decided yet, what iˇll present her. But I think Iˇll ask my good friend, who lives in other galaxy about a favour. In their galaxy are grown a very rare type of grains, which explode while youˇre eating their.I think itˇll be a good present.
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  1. Anny2 апреля 2013 г. в 05:14

    Your topic is very difficult but story is very nice.You have a big fantasy.

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  2. Игорь2 апреля 2013 г. в 05:14

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  3. Roma Gorbenkov2 апреля 2013 г. в 05:17

    The title of topic is unusual. Therefore I liked this story, it is interesting.

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  4. Jana2 апреля 2013 г. в 05:19

    You have quite unusual topic, but you managed with your task and it was very interesting and easy to read your creative text.

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  5. Maria I.2 апреля 2013 г. в 05:21

    I enjoyed reading your story.It made me smile, thank you for that!

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  6. Игорь2 апреля 2013 г. в 05:22

    Haha, creative work! By the way I like all what is connected with space and universe. Cool story, Bro!

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  7. Nadja2 апреля 2013 г. в 05:23

    You have crazy fantasy. Story is funny and made me laught.

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  8. Valeria2 апреля 2013 г. в 05:26

    Very creative and interesting topic,good job Edgar.

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  9. Irina2 апреля 2013 г. в 05:28

    When I saw topic I thought: " What can Edgar write on it?" After reading, my mood became better! Thank u!

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  10. Reelika2 апреля 2013 г. в 05:31

    This is a really exciting story. But I think you could more describe the present.

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  11. Unknown2 апреля 2013 г. в 05:34

    You wrote very funny fantasy. I think you must continue writting that fantasy. So i am waiting part 2.

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  12. Unknown2 апреля 2013 г. в 05:35

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  13. Unknown2 апреля 2013 г. в 05:38

    Your story is very funny and really interesting! I think you have enormous fantasy and great sense of humour.

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