пятница, 25 января 2013 г.

Test 24.01.12

I think the story took place somewhere in Italy, nowadays. It started when a young man, whose name is Jack was tired of the bustle of city and decided to travell.He had passed many miles until he met a gril. It was an ordinary day. The weather was great.While his travelling, when he saw a girl, who was bitten by a snake.She was lying near a road, unconsious.Jack decided to save her life at any rate.He gathered herbs and began to cure the girl. In some time girl felt herself better and even could walk.So they decided to continue their travelling together. After some time they found a camp in the forest,where were groups of teenagers,who were sitting at the campfire singing song and telling stories.They joined them.After some time Jack and the girl had to go. One day the girl said, that she was missed her parents and wanted to go home. Jack was agree with her decision and they decided to move back home. Two days later Jack and the girl, whose name was Anny were at Anny`s home.Her parents were very happy to see their daughter and her boyfriend. I`m sure they have lived happilly since then.

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  1. 1. The story must have a title and paragraphs (introduction, main parts and a conclusion.
    2. Rather a lot of mistakes in tenses
    -was Jack
    -he was travelling, he saw a girl
    - who had been bitten by
    -there were groups
    -a song
    -- missed her parents
    - Jack agreed...

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